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"Laß los" - July 2007

...another shade of orange pounds my chest.
it levitates me.


Respect to the trembling ball of light.
You've hung for so long,
You may go to bed so bid farewell one last time.
-
The ground moves; we hear nothing.
Your lips drenched in the rouge of the horizon.
It fools my tired eyes: it's fusing with the sky.
but they will not tell me.
You feel it too.
-
So say
Without the words
that may misguide me
or caress my faith into a false submission of belief.
-
Block out your whispers...
which come every while or so
...for the drone of unidentified voices
threatening to control my attention.
I press my hands to my ears
felt you falling down my face.
-
Your only respone, be it another whiss... per,
does not soothe quite the way you wanted.
My feet gripped to the ground.
skip a beat
I inhale.

...a darker purple pounds my chest
and lifts me into the lighthouse's ray.


The clearest chalk running backwards through my line of sight.
Celebrate the fall of dusk, 'spinning'.
Towering above...
everything else
...every silhouette:
senses.
-
Heavy shores deep inside the nose
serving their master the breeze who
swings the hair from my face
-
they give thanks.
To the faint sounds of crickets.
Turn away from the purple
into the still.
Something is out there.

Celebrate.
©2007-2008 `12memories
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This documents one man's struggle to sustain
his romantic relationship with the sea
on the last day of time.

Lass meinen Arm los.
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~Brightscales:iconBrightscales: Jul 29, 2007, 8:48:17 PM
This is good! I like it :D

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When life grabs you by the reins, give it all you got!
`12memories:icon12memories: Aug 2, 2007, 9:24:03 AM
Thanks a lot.

this means very much to me :thanks:

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Terrify me
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you can't silence the memories...
~Raven-heart666:iconRaven-heart666: Aug 8, 2007, 12:54:22 PM
Let these shores never dies.

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A broken heart broadcasts, my love is yours.

Raven heart,
~Raven-heart666:iconRaven-heart666: Aug 8, 2007, 12:54:49 PM
die*

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A broken heart broadcasts, my love is yours.

Raven heart,
`12memories:icon12memories: Aug 9, 2007, 3:45:20 PM
:heart:

I'm glad you have enjoyed this!
:glomp:

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Terrify me
¤¤¤¤¤
you can't silence the memories...
~Raven-heart666:iconRaven-heart666: Aug 9, 2007, 5:32:53 PM
Comment my stuff

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A broken heart broadcasts, my love is yours.

Raven heart,
~thewaterbook:iconthewaterbook: Sep 19, 2007, 2:22:46 PM
Daniel...Oh my God. How...when...MAH!? I am shocked. That was amazing. People, read this already! How dare you write better than me, you bastard. ._.

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~ellenjanuary:iconellenjanuary: Sep 22, 2007, 3:41:25 PM
Skillz, baby! :highfive:

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unknowing stuff daily...
`12memories:icon12memories: Sep 22, 2007, 4:17:22 PM
oh wow, thanks :happycry:!!

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Terrify me
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you can't silence the memories...
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